Alliteration Poetry

We have been exploring lots of different poetry formats, and playing with words. We all sit in table groups called "Learning Rocketships" ...because the tables sort of make the shape of a rocket!

This is our group's first attempt at Alliterative Poetry based on our names
(of course, we have substituted our real names with our secret code Internet names):


Wizard ShuWer went wow!!!

Awesome WhaAly actively ate!!!

Kool Kookaburra FisKyl flys!!!

Cool OneCod crafted carefully!!!

GorTho the tank tiger!!!

Miss Magic Marvelous GilMan!!!

Poems

Summer Time Fun

By FisKyl

Summertime fun

Ready to run

Into the pool

To have some fun

Summer time camping

Out we go to do some tramping

Summertime feast

Put on the barbecue

So we can eat eat eat

Summertime celebration

Ready to make a family creation

Run run

Lets have some fun

In the great deep down under

Having summer time wonder

Holiday beach

By AndTeg

Holiday beach

waiting in the water

we surf in it

we jump in it

sometimes we play in it

all summer long

Soccer

By AndTeg

Soccer

ball flying

grass ripping

legs hurting

people cheering

yea!

we got a goal

starting again

to get another goal

ball spinning

people cheering

children screaming

people sweating

adults yakking

out of bounds!

Octopoems

Dragons

By HilSam

A dragon is purple

They are summer

Up in the sky

They are warm

A skin coat

Flame coloured bean bag

Jane And The Dragon

Flame Grilled Pork

Glenview Kid

By Hilsam

A Glenview Kid is green

They are Spring

Glenview School !

Sunny

School Uniform

Teacher Chair

Be Our Best Movie

Fish and Chips

Witches

By HilSam

Witches are Black

They are Winter

Witch's lair

Thunder and Lighting

Pointy Hat

Potions

Narnia - The Lion The Witch And The Wardrobe

Magic Potion

PoliceMan

By MosSam

A Police Man is blue

He is springtime

In a car

He is cloudy

He is a hat

Seat in the car

PoliceTen Seven

A Big Donut

Glenview Kids by ChaIsa

Green and Gold

SpringTime

In the Class

Hot Sunny

Summer Clothes

Awesoms tables and chairs

The cool Moviemaker

YummyFruit!

Summer by Booros

Children playing sport,

The sunny sun is shining,

(octopoem)

A Fireman by HedChl

A Fireman is red

He is Autumn

In a Firetruck

In a tall building

He is sunny

A yellow hat a red shirt and pants

He is an addvert

Roasted healthy vegetables.

Summer Holidays By BeaSav


Holidays with friends,
In the middle of the pool,
We swam in it,
Ran in it,
Sometimes we eat ham in it,
All summer long.








By some of the Young Poets of Room1

Incredible Seasons

Yesterday the "Incredibles" reading group wrote a poem about the best things about "seasons". Firstly we read a Journal poem, then we worked out the rhyming pattern, and what each line was about in each verse, so we could try to write our own poem. Once we did our first draft together, we proofread the poem (by fixing spelling mistakes), then we edited the poem (by finding even better words use).

This is the poem:


Incredible Seasons


I walk to the best school with my brother
Sun smiles across the cloudless sky
Birds chirping drowsily as they fly
I can't wait to see my friends


Training for my competitive hockey games
Warm coloured leaves crunching on the ground
Wind swirling all around
My team is awesome and we will win!


I need my warm scarf and my cosy gloves
Wind gusting through my hair
Thunderstorms give me such a scare
Snuggling up at home curled up in my blankets


I kick my school bag into my wardrobe
Sparkling tinsel and glitter spilled on the floor
A colourful wreath on the door
I cant wait for christmas!!!


Published by FisKyl and MosSam (for the Incredibles)

Our Class!!!!!

500 people party coming soon

On the 21 of october 2009 we found out that we are coming close to 500 visits. We came to a conclusion that when we reach 500 visits we will have a party. We hope that the party will be held before the year 6's leave.

Year 4 - 6 Athletics

ATHLETICS

IS

HERE!

We run,we jump,we throw and we land on our bottoms in the sand.........................................

WE TAKE

SPORTS

SERIOUSLY...

We are Senior Students and love sports we are training up for the big day so wish us luck.

The top sportsmen are going to go to Interschools and to represent

GLENVIEWSCHOOL!

By Whaaly

Welcome to Term 4 !

We have been buzzing with excitement about the term with lots of things coming up like :

• The Gala
• Athletics
• The Big Day Out
• Grandparents day

We have been sitting at our desks shaped like Learning Rockets these are the names of our rockets:

1. Endeavorly Holdens the 1st
2. Rainbow Rockets
3. Thinking apolo 6
4. Lightning Strike 1

We are going to make toothbrush bracelets. (We will keep you posted on the toothbrush bracelets.)

Written By MosSam HilSam and Maadom.