Showing posts with label Poems. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Poems. Show all posts

Friday, November 27, 2009

Spooky

Thunder, lightning, gloom and doom.
Scary, chatter in the night.
Freaky, chuckle darkened room
Close your eyes and grab on tight!


Breaking steps and creaking floors.
Screaming witches and snarling bats.
Ghosts that slime up through the toilet.
Wriggling snakes and flapping cats.


A skeleton with white bones.
Starts following us –He’s running fast!
Right now count Dracula is falling in.
Quick crack the floor! Phew- Safe at last!


Let’s line up for another two!
That haunted house is really awesome fun.


By JuIsa and PedMax

Friday, October 30, 2009

Incredible Seasons

Yesterday the "Incredibles" reading group wrote a poem about the best things about "seasons". Firstly we read a Journal poem, then we worked out the rhyming pattern, and what each line was about in each verse, so we could try to write our own poem. Once we did our first draft together, we proofread the poem (by fixing spelling mistakes), then we edited the poem (by finding even better words use).

This is the poem:


Incredible Seasons


I walk to the best school with my brother
Sun smiles across the cloudless sky
Birds chirping drowsily as they fly
I can't wait to see my friends


Training for my competitive hockey games
Warm coloured leaves crunching on the ground
Wind swirling all around
My team is awesome and we will win!


I need my warm scarf and my cosy gloves
Wind gusting through my hair
Thunderstorms give me such a scare
Snuggling up at home curled up in my blankets


I kick my school bag into my wardrobe
Sparkling tinsel and glitter spilled on the floor
A colourful wreath on the door
I cant wait for christmas!!!


Published by FisKyl and MosSam (for the Incredibles)