She saw the towns people with buckets and hoses trying to put out the fire. They were running around screaming and shouting 'Fire Fire help'!!!
Amanda saw that the old peoples home was on fire, it was burning wildly.She flew quickly to the fire and snorted the flames into her wet nostrils, the fire was then under control.
Arthur came down and saw Amanda with the townspeople, cheering and slapping her on the back. The town council then said Amanda can stay.
Horray! Horray!
By WatJar
2 comments:
What a well written ending to this story. You have used some exciting words. I like happy endings.
Malcolm
Hi GreJay,
That was a very exciting ending that you wrote!! Keep up the great work.
Miss Lavakula and Room 10@Pt England School
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